This is a sample sequential page I did for Freelance Author Don Smith Jr. – I thought it turned out to be a pretty cool page- Don’s script is after the pencilled page- enjoy! 

  Sample 1 page—Zombie & Girl 


PANEL 1: 

WE SEE A WOMAN RUNNING. SHE HAS LONG HAIR AND SHE IS A T-SHIRT AND SKIRT. SHE HAS A TERRIFIED LOOK ON HER FACE. WE SEE SHADOWS ON THE GROUND. 

GIRL 1: Keep away! 
SFX: Uhhhhhhh! Uhhhhhhhh! 

PANEL 2:  

WE SEE A ZOMBIE. HE IS REACHING OUT. HIS FACE IS DECADE. HIS RIGHT ARM IS STRETCHED AND WE SEE BOTH FLESH AND SHIRT SLEEVE HANGING OFF. HIS LEFT ARM IS IN A CLAW LIKE POSE. 

ZOMBIE 1: Uhhhh!  
GIRL OFF PANEL 2: Noo! 

PANEL 3:  

WE SEE AN OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT OF THE GIRL AGAINST A BRICK WALL. SHE IS FRIGHTENED AND WE SEE THE BACK OF THE ZOMBIE’S HEAD. 

GIRL 1: Please! Stop! 
ZOMBIE 2: AAAAAHHHHH! 

PANEL 4: 

WE SEE THE GIRL ON THE RIGHT SIDE OF THE PANEL WITH HER HANDS UP TO HER FACE. THE ZOMBIE IS STRETCHED AND ABOUT TO BITE HER.  

GIRL 1: HELP ME! 
ZOMBIE 2: AAAHHHH-UUUHHHHHH!
MAN OFF PANEL 1: Get away from her! 

Don E. Smith Jr. -Author